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In saying this, Jameson and Watson (1998) states that the experience and qualifications required for childcare staff will be largely determined by the local authority registration by the philosophy or ethos you wish to adopt in the nursery. Financial constraints will also affect recruitment choices. They go on to say managers should aim to appoint as many fully qualified and appropriately experienced people as possible. The parents and children have the right to expect a high level of competence from the individuals caring for their children. bruce(2000) states parents in particular, it is important that the early childhood leader convey confidence and genuine acknowledgement of the importance of the job. Parents place their most important extension of self that is, their children, in the care of an early childhood practitioners.